Talofa Tina, I love how you have put the slide background black, red, black, red.Next time you could add a picture in each slide. What is your favourite flavor ice cream?
Kia Ora Tina. I like how you told us your age, what school you go to and you care about your family in the about the author slide. Next time you could try use capital like a capital I and a space after a full stop. This reminds me of doing my all about me slide in term 1. Do you like doing things like this at school?
Kia Ora Tina. My name is Reagan and I am in Mamaku 2. Miharo! (Amazing in Te Reo Maori)! I like how you have used lots of detail. Did you enjoy doing this? From Reagan
Kia Ora Tina, My name is Corianna and I am from Mamaku 2 I really like your slide it tells me a lot about you. My favorite place to go would be Hawaii because of all the tropical fruit and beaches. Well done maybe next time on the title page add your name. By for now from Corianna.
Talofa Tina, I love how you have put the slide background black, red, black, red.Next time you could add a picture in each slide. What is your favourite flavor ice cream?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Tina. I like how you told us your age, what school you go to and you care about your family in the about the author slide. Next time you could try use capital like a capital I and a space after a full stop. This reminds me of doing my all about me slide in term 1. Do you like doing things like this at school?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Tina It is Summer here.I like Learning about you well done and I really like sports too and I think that would be my fav subject well done bye
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Tina. My name is Reagan and I am in Mamaku 2. Miharo! (Amazing in Te Reo Maori)! I like how you have used lots of detail. Did you enjoy doing this? From Reagan
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Tina,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Corianna and I am from Mamaku 2
I really like your slide it tells me a lot about you. My favorite place to go would be Hawaii because of all the tropical fruit and beaches. Well done maybe next time on the title page add your name.
By for now from Corianna.
Kia Ora Tina. Hauroa here and i like the way you put a lot of information in it and you told a lot of stuff about you.
ReplyDeleteGOOD JOB!!!